well to be honest, it still wasnt good.
your foot came off on a few tricks, you obviously didnt land the front bri air, and almost everything was flyout.
well no offence this was shit u didnt land half of the tricks and i f you did they where really sketchy ,, even skeacter then me ..... and thats preety bad hahahahahahaha
constructive criticism - keep feet on scooter while landing, do tricks that arnt hated on [dont do bris esp flyout], if your gonna do flyout, it better be sick, ride more transitions in parks and do lines to show consistancy, go above coping, dont take foot off when airing