Jake ODonnell photography gallery. (update page 10)

Jake ODonnell

Steel Member
Ive been into photography for a while now.
and every now and than i fool around and take a couple pictures and people say their good?
i don't know many "techniques" or..anything like that, so don't expect something professional. i would like advice, tips, criticism , anything that can help me progress. as of right now, im using an Olympus SP500A. its not very good, but im hopefully getting a better camera for my birthday.
so anyways, heres some of my pictures, feedback is wanted!

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Aaron

Silver Member
Forest Etter said:
literally amazing....

I fail to see the 'literal amazingness' of these photos.
Sorry to be the one to point this out, but there isn't much special that makes you different from every other photographer on this site..
You're first post is comprised of random shots of things around your house, and garden, get out and shoot the world... Then we will start to see some originality.
The last two are way to deep, the dof should be much shallower.
Sorry,
Couldn't let everyone keep lying to you.
 

Jake ODonnell

Steel Member
AaronBransdon. said:
Forest Etter said:
literally amazing....

I fail to see the 'literal amazingness' of these photos.
Sorry to be the one to point this out, but there isn't much special that makes you different from every other photographer on this site..
You're first post is comprised of random shots of things around your house, and garden, get out and shoot the world... Then we will start to see some originality.
The last two are way to deep, the dof should be much shallower.
Sorry,
Couldn't let everyone keep lying to you.
okay. yeah no problem. i was waiting for someone to say something like this, haha.
i have been wanting to go around, besides my house to take more pictures, but i haven't had the time to do it.
could you explain to me what "dof" is please?

Chris Bendel said:
im gonna guess
tell me if im right

zr85???????
noo haha.
close though
 

Aaron

Silver Member
Jake ODonnell said:
AaronBransdon. said:
Forest Etter said:
literally amazing....

I fail to see the 'literal amazingness' of these photos.
Sorry to be the one to point this out, but there isn't much special that makes you different from every other photographer on this site..
You're first post is comprised of random shots of things around your house, and garden, get out and shoot the world... Then we will start to see some originality.
The last two are way to deep, the dof should be much shallower.
Sorry,
Couldn't let everyone keep lying to you.
okay. yeah no problem. i was waiting for someone to say something like this, haha.
i have been wanting to go around, besides my house to take more pictures, but i haven't had the time to do it.
could you explain to me what "dof" is please?

Mmm.
Dof is the depth of field, it tells what is in focus, (Generally at the front of the photo) to what is out of focus (Generally at the back), a shallow dof means that the objects out of focus, aren't very much out, only a little, whereas a deeper dof means that the out of focus items are more blurred as such.
You do have some ability, i just fail to see it as yet, i'll keep an open mind until your next post.
 

Jake ODonnell

Steel Member
AaronBransdon. said:
Jake ODonnell said:
AaronBransdon. said:
Forest Etter said:
literally amazing....

I fail to see the 'literal amazingness' of these photos.
Sorry to be the one to point this out, but there isn't much special that makes you different from every other photographer on this site..
You're first post is comprised of random shots of things around your house, and garden, get out and shoot the world... Then we will start to see some originality.
The last two are way to deep, the dof should be much shallower.
Sorry,
Couldn't let everyone keep lying to you.
okay. yeah no problem. i was waiting for someone to say something like this, haha.
i have been wanting to go around, besides my house to take more pictures, but i haven't had the time to do it.
could you explain to me what "dof" is please?

Mmm.
Dof is the depth of field, it tells what is in focus, (Generally at the front of the photo) to what is out of focus (Generally at the back), a shallow dof means that the objects out of focus, aren't very much out, only a little, whereas a deeper dof means that the out of focus items are more blurred as such.
You do have some ability, i just fail to see it as yet, i'll keep an open mind until your next post.
ohhh, okay. i see, thanks.
 

Jake ODonnell

Steel Member
couple photos i took the other night

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(i really like this one, but i uploaded it on myspace, so the quality isnt the best.) ill upload on flickr later
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(same with this picture)
 
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