obviously the video quality was shitty which makes the video less enjoyable and harder to appreciate what's in it. also the song selection was bad because by the time it actually started the video was over. also, it's kinda weird when half of your video is of falls.
but to the actual scooter riding capability you have tailwhipping down alright you seem to be able to do singles no problem but, unless this is because you filmed in one day, you should learn more tricks like spins or barspins or grinds, just more technical stuff. it's definately a good start and there's a lot of expansion i think you're able of doing. and if you are able to do those things definately film more before releasing a vid, especially if it's your first because then the first impression of you isn't as good.
what an awesome park i wish there was one like that around here