I seriously LOVED this video. Your filming, editing, and musical sense is progressing nicely. I just have a couple MINOR critiques:
1) Don't choose two songs by the same artist in the same video. Try to mix it up a bit. It makes the video more enjoyable to watch.
2) When you take your fisheye off and start to shoot longlens, I think your forgetting to turn OIS back ON. That is a must. All the long lens shots were really shaky. Also, bring a tripod along with you. You can get the really small ones that can fit in a pocket. It just makes longlens much easier to watch and much easier to film.
3) FONTS MATTER!!! I cannot stress this enough. The titles in the video were childish and boring. Look at the titles in a real skate movie. You will not see some cheap font that just stands there for a bit. You may have to learn some after effects keyframing and composition, but it makes the whole video a LOT more professional.
Anyways, these are just MINOR critiques. I'm really excited that the video came out so well and I really enjoyed it.