a scooter poem?

MattThomMakesMeWarmInside

MattThomMakesMeWarmInside

Silver Member
Its ok guys you can call me homo 8)

yeah its pretty much written for idiots to understand, so someone who doesnt understand should understand it, plus the beginning doesnt talk all that much about scoots because its supposed to have a build up and then in the end reveal what it is. It was for English yet I only had to make 1 poem instead of 2, so I didnt use this one

Going fast and jumping high
I�m waiting to make the catch
Looking down with precision
I time it and make the snatch

Down the street flat on the ground
It doesn�t matter where
Going nice, steady, and slow
Or fast in midair

Flowing, faster, flying, flailing
I smash into the ground
I lay there all cut up and beat
Yet the smile I hold is profound

No matter how bad the circumstances
As long as it�s by my side
No matter what I�m doing
I can set all negativity aside

It brings me joy, it�s so fun
Whipping big gaps and stairs
Going down the street with combo concentration
Doing every trick with care

Doing my tailwhip catches
Or throwing fakie barspins down a hill
It�s the best feeling in the world
It�s the fun of the challenge and thrill

If I�m riding my scooter I can�t be mad
It takes care of the want that I need
Just another day or breaking away
A day in which I succeed


I think your poem is all pretty good and covers the sport pretty well, some of it was a little awkward... and I really liked the full cabs nose mannys this is tech youll never have to worry about snapping a deck.... clever
 
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Pete Pachota

Member
Wow, maybe I could pick a few verses, then just sing the first two lines of a verse twice and 12 bar blues it, that's basically what Im up to with music.
 
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blindscooterboy

Steel Member
Gant.. thanks man yours was also really good, and like i said i didnt really edit it so some spots arent perfect

reuben A L said:
OMG both of those poems were amazing they have to be posted on the news page or something. �¸ i'm so happy there are no haters in here.
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same here, i honestly thought atleast half the people posting in here would be haters

and thanks to everyone else for the positive comments!
 
Jordan Jasa

Jordan Jasa

Silver Member
Now nose manny's and fullcabs,
this stuff is tech.
Theres no worries here,
about snapping a deck.

i beg to differ haha, i break decks the most out of any part.
 
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blindscooterboy

Steel Member
Jordan said:
Now nose manny's and fullcabs,
this stuff is tech.
Theres no worries here,
about snapping a deck.

i beg to differ haha, i break decks the most out of any part.
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lol yea but compared to street or park riding you should be least likely to break a deck riding flat unless your like super hardcore haha
 
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mitchwashere53

Mitch Baldry
that was great how long did it take you to make that and you should make one for every terrain. street flat/tech and park wuud be great keep it up
 
Slasher

Slasher

Member
blindscooterboy said:
Jordan said:
Now nose manny's and fullcabs,
this stuff is tech.
Theres no worries here,
about snapping a deck.

i beg to differ haha, i break decks the most out of any part.
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lol yea but compared to street or park riding you should be least likely to break a deck riding flat unless your like super hardcore haha
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RE you shittig meh!!!! Jordan is the shit!!! he's the man with the plan and everyone should be thankful to have a lil bro like him!

-The poem was sick man...you should make more of them, then make a small booklet of skooter poems, youd be able to sell em man!
 
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blindscooterboy

Steel Member
M i t c hBaldry said:
that was great how long did it take you to make that and you should make one for every terrain. street flat/tech and park wuud be great keep it up
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literally it only took 5-10 minutes lol
and ill think about making more since people are suggesting it and since everyone seems to like this one
 
LukeMaff

LukeMaff

I got myself banned.
best part

Theres flowing parks,
and boosting airs.
Tables n inverts,
or the craziest flairs.

Or you can hit up the streets,
and do some rails.
Hucking big tricks,
and crashing on bails.
 
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