any extra editing things i should add?

[Jack Barrass]

i have sony vegas 10 and im new to it
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L6HjsiV0bY4&feature=youtu.be
Anything i should add edit wise

 

[tyler_magro]

imo it just needs slight color correction and itd look better with quicker transitions

 

[Jack Barrass]

mmk

 

[tyler_magro]

bring dat saturation up

 

[Jack Barrass]

Would u mind briely telling me how first time using Vegas

 

[tylerbravo]

its over edited, too many transitions and effects.

 

[kileanscoots]

its over edited, too many transitions and effects.

this

 

[iliveinahouse1]

take out the wording out the first bit

 

[Jack Barrass]

What wording?

 

[Dom Marconi]

Cool video bro, needs more extra editing things.

 

[iliveinahouse1]

his name, maybe take this video again with a tripod

 

[Robert]

no flyout, moar film burns