Help me, i'm shit in english ! Exodewear flyer

[exodewear]

Hello, i want to do an exodewear flyer in english, This texte is ok ? No mistake ? Do you have an idea of better sentence ?

EXODEWEAR is a Swiss brand of Streetwear clothes. Based on the Hiphop move, our clothes are the best you can find in the urban style. Our slogan, "URBAN WAKE UP" definitely represents a young and innovative mind. You can find and order all our clothing collection on the online-shop: exodewear.com

It's just a small texte ! Thank for help !

 

[Sam Carter]

Souds Pritty good 2 me!

 

[Joe Hilditch]

Souds Pritty good 2 me!

 

[Storer]

Yes, Pretty Accurate

 

[yamamsmells]

Good stuff, sounds professional.

 

[farmboy uk]

Sounds good, if you want it to sound like it was written by an Englishman, maybe a little bit of rearranging

EXODEWEAR is a Swiss brand of Streetwear clothes. Based on the Hiphop move, our urban style clothes are the best you can find. Our slogan, "URBAN WAKE UP" definitely represents a young and innovative mind. You can find and order all our clothing collection on the online-shop: exodewear.com

Personally i think that sounds more fluid but meh

 

[dre]

How about:

EXODEWEAR is a Swiss brand of street-wear clothing based on the Hip-hop movement. Our urban-style clothes are the best you can find, period. Our trademark slogan, "URBAN WAKE-UP" definitely represents a young and innovative mindset. You can find and order all our clothing in our online shop at www.exodewear.com

 

[qwxor]

If you want to relate to todays youth.

It should say

Yo niggaz what's crunk, we smoke weed and get high every night and fuck girls yeahhh nigga fuck shit upppp. buy our fresh ass mothafuckin clothes boiiiiiiiii yeaaaaa exodewear.com

 

[302scooters]

If you want to relate to todays youth.

It should say

Yo niggaz what's crunk, we smoke weed and get high every night and fuck girls yeahhh nigga fuck shit upppp. buy our fresh ass mothafuckin clothes boiiiiiiiii yeaaaaa exodewear.com

Hahahahah.

 

[Hep Greg]

If you want to relate to todays youth.

It should say

Yo niggaz what's crunk, we smoke weed and get high every night and fuck girls yeahhh nigga fuck shit upppp. buy our fresh ass mothafuckin clothes boiiiiiiiii yeaaaaa exodewear.com

LMAO CHRIS I LOVE YOUUU

 

[dre]

If you want to relate to todays youth.

It should say

Yo niggaz what's crunk, we smoke weed and get high every night and fuck girls yeahhh nigga fuck shit upppp. buy our fresh ass mothafuckin clothes boiiiiiiiii yeaaaaa exodewear.com

hahahahahhahaha i just had a lolocaust reading that

 

[Jon Reyes]

he's right though

 

[Humma]

Hahaha i lol'd so bad at that.

 

[TUC]

wow thats brilliant lol

 

[JonnyJonDogg]

If you want to relate to todays youth.

It should say

Yo niggaz what's crunk, we smoke weed and get high every night and fuck girls yeahhh nigga fuck shit upppp. buy our fresh ass mothafuckin clothes boiiiiiiiii yeaaaaa exodewear.com

hahahahahahHhahahahahaha laughed so much at this

 

[nick12667]

watch him print that too haha

 

[Jeremy-Beau]

haha. lol