ok thanks, ill try improve on thatnot bad. I liked your part. You have potential. As for criticism, go faster on those ledge tricks. Stopping on the ledge before jumping off looks dumb most of the time.
really slow riding and shaky clips plus some cornyness lol. but other that that i enjoyed it
what you consider shaky is way different from me thenthere was two shaky clips....
I agree with Biscuit. But one thing: don´t use biggie smalls in da park footage. Other than that it was a chill & nice edit.