"Critique Me" Thread.

[Aaron]

Haha, to true.

 

[Shelby Grimnes]

Yeah I did, my bad, i'm just a little pissy and have no patience to read.

it's that time of the month

nah it wasn't

 

[Shane ryan]

Critique away!

 

[young08]

Well ill give you a positive comment, the timing & exposure is spot on.

Mainly just composition your lacking.

 

[Shelby Grimnes]

yeah what Ryan said and its a little crooked too unless that light pole is leaning

 

[Behlau]

Yeah that pole is distracting.

 

[Tom6]

bump to keep this on first page.

 

[.erik]

yes good plan

 

[Eric Magray]

new to hdr

this is 3 images bracketed at 2EV stop differences, not a single tone mapped image

 

[Aaron]

Thats a challenging one.
Looks pretty much perfect.
I'd say, tighter crop on the podium type thing, but thats more preference than anything.

 

[Eric Magray]

nah, i tried different focal lengths and i liked it there because i want the walkway and some of the tree. im pretty sure i took that at about 35mm about 18-20 feet away. and i didnt want the tree across the lake, the one that stands out, to be cut in half.

it was a tough decision to make quick since this was about 10 min after the sun went down and the park closed at dark.

 

[seankane]

really nice, eric. i like when HDRs don't look like they're computer generated, probably one of the best shots i've seen from you.

 

[idk47]

Yeah that's a fucking really good picture.

 

[P4RK3R]

Yeah I did, my bad, i'm just a little pissy and have no patience to read.

it's that time of the month

Hahaha I saw that coming

 

[young08]

Liking it eric

 

[domd]

 

[Chaseme37]

dom, a lot of those look blurry, and the tree that covers the frame to about the middle makes the picture very static, and one-sided. it's a good start, keep shooting, and google the "rule of thirds" haha.

 

[idk47]

Are you using a phone to take those pictures?

 

[Grahamk]

get it in focus,in the correct exposure and try to get interesting subjects.
tom on grahams account

 

[idk47]