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Ben Moak

Ben Moak

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love the skating picture but the stairs look really over edited for some reason, and the boat one is kind of lacking a real subject because the boats not in complete focus and its kind of far away, keep it up dud im lovin your work
 
DavidCronin

DavidCronin

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Ben Moak said:
love the skating picture but the stairs look really over edited for some reason, and the boat one is kind of lacking a real subject because the boats not in complete focus and its kind of far away, keep it up dud im lovin your work
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i was being harrassed by a drunk homeless bum so i didnt really get a good shot of the boat lol
 
DonaldM

DonaldM

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user-name said:
OMG its jordan lago
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Nah... that's PRod

Ben Moak said:
love the skating picture but the stairs look really over edited for some reason, and the boat one is kind of lacking a real subject because the boats not in complete focus and its kind of far away, keep it up dud im lovin your work
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I disagree, David, A lot of your work is over edited, but I think it's just the texture of those stairs. And the boat one is killer! It's hard to shoot because the background is so involved with the subject, however you have a nice balance with the sky. And that moon! Very well composed.

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MitKgrind by DavidCronin, on Flickr

Ledge by DavidCronin, on Flickr

JoshGluckSalFlip by DavidCronin, on Flickr

MyStreet by DavidCronin, on Flickr
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That second shot is great, again a little over edited.. but the story is there. ledge in the foreground, skater about to hit it again in the back, girlfriend chillen
 
DonaldM

DonaldM

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Stand back a little more. You can always crop later. I feel tense with this last series, no room to breath. (Or at least the bmx photos in color)
 
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