eriks photography. little update im stoked on

.erik

Member
yee ask andy it was def overcast that day

thanks mangg for the actual critique i dont get many even though i ask for them..
 

.erik

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ghost24

Member
Hes probably done updating because all anybody ever posts in his thread is "ZOMGGG YOU IZ TEH BEST FOTAGRUPHERR ON SR CAN I SUCK YOUR COCK" or "wow the spots in that picture are cool looking, im going to completetly ignore the photography elements and comment on how much i wanna ride the spot!"

basically, nobody gives critique or detailed comments
 

.erik

Member
thanks all, and yeah tom i wasnt too stoked on that one either, thought id just post it. the two medium format ones are my faves
 

ghost24

Member
Composition, timing, and colors on the first two are excellent.
Third one doesnt stand out all that much to me.
I really like the angle and composition in the 4th one, his front wheels a bit hot but its really no big deal, its still a really good photo.
The colors and timing on the second to last one are soooo good. Also, i know ive said it alot already, but the comp is really good, too.
The last one looks almost like film to me? Idk if thats what medium format is haha. The timing is literally perfect too.

Such a gooood update. I cant even find anything to critique haha.
 

.erik

Member
a big thank you austin for the actual critique. yes medium format is film. 6cm x 6cm negatives. 4th and 6th are medium format. third was kinda meh.. he wanted it i just kinda took it.

thank you everyone else

thanks everyone else
 

Aaron

Silver Member
All except the third are a bit hot.
Flash is a bit close, or not aimed correctly?
Just seems like its hitting too much ramp, and resulting in a load of white.
All the comp seems pretty spot on.
First 2 are framed beautifully with the trees.
 

.erik

Member
ehhhh i see where youre coming from, but i like the way it looks.
the last is the only one where i really wish i had taken more care in placing the flashes.. and i was waiting for someone to notice that! i dont care much for the trees in the first but i saw the trees as i was composing the 2nd and i was like fuuuuck yes this is gonna look sick.
 
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