feedback on my mates edit :)

Joe Riley

The Gypsy
Staff member
his briflips are more like tailwhips...
and i guess get more variety.

but it was pretty good.
 

Anton

Silver Member
Filmer needs to get closer and turn steady shot off. And when you have the same tricks like the inward bris, spread them out throught out the video so it dosn't get boring. Needs some lines but the hand plant was sick.
 

brian amato

Ex-Staff
To clarify, it isn't a good thing, at least in my opinion, to film a sponsor video in two days. Plus like every sponsor video I've seen lately, a ton of the tricks look like you just went "Alright just film this." What is it? "Idk just film it I'll do my normal stuff." Try to push yourself, work hard. I guess it's good to show your consistency by doing stuff you know you can do, but sometimes you gotta work really hard to get the reward. Idk maybe you did put a lot of effort into this, but it didn't seem like it to me. It wasn't bad but I don't uunderstand your reasoning behind making a sponsor video like that, in two days.
 
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