Inward Scooters Sponsor Video

Tylerr.

Super Moderator
Staff member
Dudeeee
your way bettter
=[.
this makes me sad.
but still great video dude<3
 

Hep Greg

Administrator
too many whips & bars, not enough variety in the tricks. and too much flat riding.

editing was good, and some of the gaps were pretty cool. wish you threw harder tricks over some of them.

overall, i dont think this will get you on inward, but it's a decent attempt. i'd say try again, but mix up your tricks more, try new stuff. and waay less whips.

edit: FILM GRINDSSS. YOU HAD NO GRIND TRICKS IN THIS AT ALL. NO BUENO :(
 

blindscooterboy

Steel Member
well this is deffinitly the best vid ive seen of you so far and it was really well done


just try getting a bit more variety in your riding,like more grinds and 3 combos and stuff, other then that good job and good luck
 

NickGraham.

Member
damn, I really liked that.
Alot of those tricks were so original. And all street? whaaaaa! :D
only thing I didnt like was how in every flat run you did a bar, and a double whip. so yea like hep said mix it up some.
I'd say you definately have a chance with inward.
Loved it. <33333333333333
 

DMazz

Steel Member
thanks everyone. and i def. will work on getting more variety in my videos. some of the stuff in the video is switch and you gotta remember that =P and im trying to work on better switch tricks
 

clarkyTAS

Member
pretty damn sexy
just a lil variation of tricks and you will get spono'd
lovd it at the end
"this dude's getting sponsored"
haha
 
It was almost all flat tricks. If you're going to ride non-interesting street spots (which is fine with me), then make sure that your tricks are interesting/unique. Some were, but some were just very repetitive and over used. Wayyyy to many whips in my opinion. There was not one grind in the entire video, only one manual, and two hang fives (without a hop in or out, so it really shouldn't count). There was a lot of stuff that just shouldn't be done in a video, and DEFINATELY not in a sponsor video. There was an indian giver on a relatively simple trick of a curb, and there was a hang 5 on flat...no hop up to anything and no trick out. You also shouldn't play out a gap as if it's huge, showing run up and slow mo and everything, when in reality it's not that big. The best spot in your video (that bank to wallride), you only had one clip and it was just a straight wall bonk haha. And yet, you had like 10 lines of just riding curbs. I would either try to find more interesting spots, or differenciate your tricks and make them more interesting.

There's my critique.
 

DMazz

Steel Member
Conor Davidson said:
It was almost all flat tricks. If you're going to ride non-interesting street spots (which is fine with me), then make sure that your tricks are interesting/unique. Some were, but some were just very repetitive and over used. Wayyyy to many whips in my opinion. There was not one grind in the entire video, only one manual, and two hang fives (without a hop in or out, so it really shouldn't count). There was a lot of stuff that just shouldn't be done in a video, and DEFINATELY not in a sponsor video. There was an indian giver on a relatively simple trick of a curb, and there was a hang 5 on flat...no hop up to anything and no trick out. You also shouldn't play out a gap as if it's huge, showing run up and slow mo and everything, when in reality it's not that big. The best spot in your video (that bank to wallride), you only had one clip and it was just a straight wall bonk haha. And yet, you had like 10 lines of just riding curbs. I would either try to find more interesting spots, or differenciate your tricks and make them more interesting.

There's my critique.
the only reason i showed the run way to the one gap was to show how narrow it is.
 
You said you wouldn't argue, but obviously you couldn't help it.
I do realize that about the gap, but that really doesn't matter. The gap didn't seem difficult to the viewer (me in this case), and that's what really matters. If you do a tailwhip over el toro, but it looks like a 3 stair, I'm not gonna be impressed. Try to get better angles if it's as difficult as you make it seem.
 

DMazz

Steel Member
just telling what i did it for. no aruguement there just an explanation please listen to what i i said in my first post of this thread and dont post again in here. idc if your an admin or not respect this thread
 
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