My first edit

[Josh.c]

Hey this is my first edit i have been working on it for most of the summer holidays. I'am really happy on how it came out and very proud of it. Comments ?? Improvements ??

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h6UCD70X8w8&feature=youtu.be

 

[Dewey]

not bad but you know people are ganna complain about mongo and slow speed and a stolen song