dont do indian givers. ever again haha. you did a feeble to fakie or fs 180 out, then you did a bs halfcab. that's a no-no. i liked all the creative little flat things you did but on some of them you really need to go faster. like... make sure youre still moving at a decent speed. some of them, you were barely moving forward. aaaaand finally, don't start the video with only a tailwhip if you are going to be doing rotorwhips and double whips and bartwists and all sorts of good things. the best trick needs to be last, but other than that, try to keep the other clips fairly consistent throughout the video.
i liked it though. i hope you keep riding cause i could see your creative riding taking you places.