Writing poetry
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302scooters
Member
I have been wanting to write one but haven't gotten around to really do it
SHAKE JUNT is green
skateboardings black
WEED gets you high
and fat boys love CRACK
I dont do DRUGS
but people think i DO
this poem makes no SENSE
so i wont beat the SHIT
Outta YOU!(AKA im gonna call your ass out on AIM and have a virtual fight! its way cooler!!!!!!!!!)
hahaha i got shit allllllday
skateboardings black
WEED gets you high
and fat boys love CRACK
I dont do DRUGS
but people think i DO
this poem makes no SENSE
so i wont beat the SHIT
Outta YOU!(AKA im gonna call your ass out on AIM and have a virtual fight! its way cooler!!!!!!!!!)
hahaha i got shit allllllday
I remember one night, i was so restless,
Stirring in bed the thoughts of you, teasing me, taunting me,
My heart a mere puppet, the strings in your hand, You had complete control.
As i rolled out of bed, surrendering to your torment,
I laughed silently at the situation i was in,
Put my shirt on, and walked out the front door, still consumed in apathy.
I wandered aimlessly down the street, lost in thought, lost completely,
Suddenly shocked, at how this still defeats me,
As i approached the church, a euphoric feeling seemed to brush past me..it didnt last long.
I sat there in the dark, but knew there was nothing there for me,
Got up, and started to head back home,
Overwhelmed in thoughts and memories with almost every step.
I got back to my room, and my reflection stared back at me from my mirror,
I couldnt look at myself for more than 10 seconds, i turned to my bed, and sat down,
I was fixated on the ground, When suddenly small spots started to appear,
Puzzled at first, until it all became clear, realizing that what i was seeing were my own tears,
All of this.. and to think, I havent even seen You for four years.
Feel free to judge me.
I wrote this late at night, after dreaming everything that was in the poem. I woke up, and just wrote it all down how i remember it.
If i do find anything else, less dark. I might post it.
Stirring in bed the thoughts of you, teasing me, taunting me,
My heart a mere puppet, the strings in your hand, You had complete control.
As i rolled out of bed, surrendering to your torment,
I laughed silently at the situation i was in,
Put my shirt on, and walked out the front door, still consumed in apathy.
I wandered aimlessly down the street, lost in thought, lost completely,
Suddenly shocked, at how this still defeats me,
As i approached the church, a euphoric feeling seemed to brush past me..it didnt last long.
I sat there in the dark, but knew there was nothing there for me,
Got up, and started to head back home,
Overwhelmed in thoughts and memories with almost every step.
I got back to my room, and my reflection stared back at me from my mirror,
I couldnt look at myself for more than 10 seconds, i turned to my bed, and sat down,
I was fixated on the ground, When suddenly small spots started to appear,
Puzzled at first, until it all became clear, realizing that what i was seeing were my own tears,
All of this.. and to think, I havent even seen You for four years.
Feel free to judge me.
I wrote this late at night, after dreaming everything that was in the poem. I woke up, and just wrote it all down how i remember it.
If i do find anything else, less dark. I might post it.
skylerforreal
Member
Heres one I just wrote... It was written in like 5 minutes, so spare me....
It wasn't always like this...
This is not what I intended to become,
I did not want it to start this way,
Now I am left with this devastating end,
I've tried fixing it,
But it isnt that easy you see,
I wouldn't have this lifestyle,
I wouldn't make the mistakes I made,
IF I had only known,
If I knew what I would be regretting,
I would not regret it at all,
I would make sure it never happens,
There wouldn't be anything to regret,
This is not how I always felt,
This wasn't how I usually expressed myself,
I didn't express myself at all,
But if I had it my way,
If I could control one thing, one time,
If I could alter something, or someones life,
It would mean the world to me,
If I could impact someones world,
Make it that much better,
Maybe if everyone thought like I did,
The world would not struggle,
The world would not be in depression,
The world would not be one of hate,
When does this life end,
When did it REALLY begin,
If I keep asking questions,
When is the last one,
When will they be answered,
Or better yet,
I look into the future and ask,
WILL they be answered?
It wasn't always like this...
This is not what I intended to become,
I did not want it to start this way,
Now I am left with this devastating end,
I've tried fixing it,
But it isnt that easy you see,
I wouldn't have this lifestyle,
I wouldn't make the mistakes I made,
IF I had only known,
If I knew what I would be regretting,
I would not regret it at all,
I would make sure it never happens,
There wouldn't be anything to regret,
This is not how I always felt,
This wasn't how I usually expressed myself,
I didn't express myself at all,
But if I had it my way,
If I could control one thing, one time,
If I could alter something, or someones life,
It would mean the world to me,
If I could impact someones world,
Make it that much better,
Maybe if everyone thought like I did,
The world would not struggle,
The world would not be in depression,
The world would not be one of hate,
When does this life end,
When did it REALLY begin,
If I keep asking questions,
When is the last one,
When will they be answered,
Or better yet,
I look into the future and ask,
WILL they be answered?
i was listening to some random song, and wrote this in as long as it took to type. no thinking involved.
Songs like this make me excited about the rest of my life
And I canÃ?¢ââ??‰â??¢t see myself with anyone, anyone but you
The times we play and the times we sing
Why wait when we can rule the world
ThereÃ?¢ââ??‰â??¢s nothing to stop us and nowhere to yield
Driving down this road of no return, why return when we can rule the world
I sleep to dream and dream to fly,
But why sleep when IÃ?¢ââ??‰â??¢m with you baby
I found myself with crusty eyes, a sore back
A prick on my finger and a kiss on my cheek
Oh baby IÃ?¢ââ??‰â??¢m in love with you
I sleep to dream and dream to fly
WhatÃ?¢ââ??‰â??¢s left, no limits, no caution,
WeÃ?¢ââ??‰â??¢re here for now and there in a little
We have nothing to fear, this is a lullaby and IÃ?¢ââ??‰â??¢m living my dream.
Songs like this make me excited about the rest of my life
And I canÃ?¢ââ??‰â??¢t see myself with anyone, anyone but you
The times we play and the times we sing
Why wait when we can rule the world
ThereÃ?¢ââ??‰â??¢s nothing to stop us and nowhere to yield
Driving down this road of no return, why return when we can rule the world
I sleep to dream and dream to fly,
But why sleep when IÃ?¢ââ??‰â??¢m with you baby
I found myself with crusty eyes, a sore back
A prick on my finger and a kiss on my cheek
Oh baby IÃ?¢ââ??‰â??¢m in love with you
I sleep to dream and dream to fly
WhatÃ?¢ââ??‰â??¢s left, no limits, no caution,
WeÃ?¢ââ??‰â??¢re here for now and there in a little
We have nothing to fear, this is a lullaby and IÃ?¢ââ??‰â??¢m living my dream.
Joe Hilditch
Member
Steven T said:
that's fuck awesome
Pirate SIMBA
Member
good stuff^^
Her eyes gleam and my heart beats faster
Running through the day just waiting to ask her
She controls me with the smile on her face
The way she walks always brings me to grace
She leaps through my mind constantly
Our sweet memories waiting to be written
steven t keep going. or pm me some because i love seeing peoples different writing styles.
Running through the day just waiting to ask her
She controls me with the smile on her face
The way she walks always brings me to grace
She leaps through my mind constantly
Our sweet memories waiting to be written
steven t keep going. or pm me some because i love seeing peoples different writing styles.
Walking hand in hand, reading eachothers eyes,
Would we be killed by deception and murdered by lies?
Slowly our voices raise, followed by deep sighs,
Are we being killed by deception and murdered by lies?
I start to walk away, ignoring your pleas and cries,
Were being killed by deception and murdered by lies.
Havent seen you for 5 years, despite many tries,
Weve been killed by deception, and murdered by lies.
Would we be killed by deception and murdered by lies?
Slowly our voices raise, followed by deep sighs,
Are we being killed by deception and murdered by lies?
I start to walk away, ignoring your pleas and cries,
Were being killed by deception and murdered by lies.
Havent seen you for 5 years, despite many tries,
Weve been killed by deception, and murdered by lies.