"Critique Me" Thread.

Tom LoForese

Steel Member
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yeah real old pic but tell me what you think
:)

EDIT: heres another pic

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Aaron

Silver Member
Depth of field is actually too deep.
The depth starts on the flower..
Its really soft towards the back, so you've already lost detail.
Bump up the aperature 2 stops and re-shoot :)
 

zprestoe

Member
i know iim no amazing but personally i think
1st photo - more ramp, further distance away.
2nd photo- rule of thirds.
 

idk47

Steel Member
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So noisy and i tried to reduce it, but every time i edit them in iPhoto they get all fucked up. These suck i have no clue how to night shoot, help?
 
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