Graffiti
- Thread starter Devin Hohlbein
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ChrisBrown
Steel Member
SO sick, start riding vert so you don't ruin that deck
nick silverman
Member
louizQ you know you can put more than one photo in a post?
Ben Moak
Steel Member
anybody got any crit for this?
Blake
Steel Member
where is it? i just found the picture and thought it was dope
EDIT: friend just did this
That's really sick!
Can
Member
Put the letters closer together then it would look better.
DonaldM
Member
I cant read it.
Criticism:
The fill is way too busy, the letters get lost
The cuts are too sporadic, there is no flow.
Try having the lines cut smooth. None of the loops match.
Get rid of soe of the high angled points, just make em curves.
The 3d makes no sense
Do a piece in black and white. White fill black outline, I'll be able to critique you better
Criticism:
The fill is way too busy, the letters get lost
The cuts are too sporadic, there is no flow.
Try having the lines cut smooth. None of the loops match.
Get rid of soe of the high angled points, just make em curves.
The 3d makes no sense
Do a piece in black and white. White fill black outline, I'll be able to critique you better
Can
Member
All of what you just said, is why I hate it. I'll post one of my newer ones soon so then you can critique it better.
thanks though.
Ben Moak
Steel Member
im gettin better everyday
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death to beats by Ben Moak, on Flickr
My notebook of epicness by Ben Moak, on Flickr
Boss sauce by Ben Moak, on Flickr
NWF by Ben Moak, on Flickr
Ben Moak by Ben Moak, on Flickr
Canon Lyfe by Ben Moak, on Flickr
L.T.C by Ben Moak, on Flickr
northwest fresh, k.i.d.s, OF by Ben Moak, on Flickr
death to beats by Ben Moak, on Flickr