Graffiti

[ziuolism]

 

[ChrisBrown]

SO sick, start riding vert so you don't ruin that deck

 

[DonaldM]

I'll grab a better photo later

 

[nick silverman]

louizQ you know you can put more than one photo in a post?

 

[ziuolism]

na, i didnt know.

thank you for informing me about that.

 

[Ben Moak]

North West Fresh by Ben Moak, on Flickr

my shits gettin better

anybody got any crit for this?

 

[Blake]

where is it? i just found the picture and thought it was dope

EDIT: friend just did this

That's really sick!

 

[Can]

North West Fresh by Ben Moak, on Flickr

my shits gettin better

Put the letters closer together then it would look better.

 

[Ben Moak]

thanks for the tip man

 

[Can]

This was an old Piece I found. I hate it but thought I might post it up. I was low on supplies when I did it so its done with pencils, crayons and markers.

 

[Can]

$*&^%!%@(#)*$&$^$%@&*(*&^%$#@!!>?"P:""{P

 

[DonaldM]

I cant read it.

Criticism:
The fill is way too busy, the letters get lost
The cuts are too sporadic, there is no flow.
Try having the lines cut smooth. None of the loops match.
Get rid of soe of the high angled points, just make em curves.
The 3d makes no sense

Do a piece in black and white. White fill black outline, I'll be able to critique you better

 

[Can]

I cant read it.

Criticism:
The fill is way too busy, the letters get lost
The cuts are too sporadic, there is no flow.
Try having the lines cut smooth. None of the loops match.
Get rid of soe of the high angled points, just make em curves.
The 3d makes no sense

Do a piece in black and white. White fill black outline, I'll be able to critique you better

All of what you just said, is why I hate it. I'll post one of my newer ones soon so then you can critique it better. thanks though.

 

[Ben Moak]

im gettin better everyday


My notebook of epicness by Ben Moak, on Flickr


Boss sauce by Ben Moak, on Flickr


NWF by Ben Moak, on Flickr


Ben Moak by Ben Moak, on Flickr


Canon Lyfe by Ben Moak, on Flickr


L.T.C by Ben Moak, on Flickr


northwest fresh, k.i.d.s, OF by Ben Moak, on Flickr


death to beats by Ben Moak, on Flickr

 

[nz scoot]

try make your lines flow more it will look way better

 

[Ben Moak]

alright thanks man

 

[Tristan Durham]

Doodling with a sharpie and here is something I made

and then i added on to it:

this is the first one i made, i added stuff on it and fucked it up but here it is anyways:

 

[Tristan Durham]

double. if you turn your head sideways ull see that the D in durham is the mouth, the n in tristan is the nose and then i mad an eye next to the n

what do u guys think, first time at graffiti...

 

[Ben Moak]

better than my stuff, i only started like middle of this month.

 

[Original Tristan]

oh haha ty btw thats my other account, anyways what do u guys think, critique me plz i kinda want to get into this graffitti thing