"Critique Me" Thread.

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seankane

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parker, you should work on composition.

the barn one is actually pretty cool, but just overexposed. i don't know if you have this ability, but if there was just one dim light on inside it'd look much better.
 
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P4RK3R

Member
^thanks man

seankane said:
parker, you should work on composition.

the barn one is actually pretty cool, but just overexposed. i don't know if you have this ability, but if there was just one dim light on inside it'd look much better.
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Its really old, from '43. One switch controlls every light outside. but I might be able to select a window in photoshop and turn down its brightness


edit- John that water droplet looks sick
 
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302scooters

Member
Parker said:
^thanks man

seankane said:
parker, you should work on composition.

the barn one is actually pretty cool, but just overexposed. i don't know if you have this ability, but if there was just one dim light on inside it'd look much better.
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Its really old, from '43. One switch controlls every light outside. but I might be able to select a window in photoshop and turn down its brightness


edit- John that water droplet looks sick
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Thanks dude, i've never shot one of those before haha.
 
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302scooters

Member
Thanks Ian. Flickr isn't working, Photobucket.



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Aaron

Aaron

Silver Member
Johnpanaccione. said:
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The reflection is really nice.
A landscape shot might have been a little bit better over portrait.
Exposure seems spot on.
Good work.

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Looks a bit overexposed to me? Top right.
Not much you can do though
Comp is beautiful, timing, perfect.
 
Chaseme37

Chaseme37

Member
^^^^ sickest footplant ever maybe?

oh and on the bridge photo, everything looks really nice, all I can say is that the horizon line is almost directly in the center of the photo which makes it pretty static, maybe just crop out either some sky or some water, which would bring the horizon line away from the half way point of the photo.

eh. what the heck. I'll upload a photo in here.

took this for my digital photo class in college. teacher really liked it. oh and I don't have the money for some way nice digital SLR so all of my pictures for that class were taken with a Point-And-Shoot $100 P.O.S.

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Aaron

Aaron

Silver Member
I like the shot in general, but what feel were you aiming for?
Its kinda seems dark and sinister, but its an Amp?
Depth is nice.
 
Chaseme37

Chaseme37

Member
^^^ haha aaron aaron aaron...

I was aiming for an A. and that's what I got. haha

it's actually some master control board for a bunch of amps and mics and things, that I use to record raps in my home studio haha

we all have to remember that I'm not some deep photographer, I just wanted to learn how to use photoshop better so I took that class haha

but thank you for the nice comments on my suoer dark and sinister picture, which I totally planned out beforehand. :)
 
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young08

I'M A G.
I never update my photo thread anymore, i can never be bothered too.

here's a recent photo.

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so yeh either Rip it up, Or say nice things :)
 
Aaron

Aaron

Silver Member
The lines are gorgeous. They lead your eyes around the photo so many times.
Theres something about the lack of sky that gets me though.
It just seems a bit tight, but thats about all. Its an inner-city shot, you could get away with it being tight.
 
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